Thursday, 12 April 2012

Hidden in this closet holds my ultimate secrets.
My ultimate secrets are hidden in this closet.
It’s too small to hold a foist.
It’s too big to hold a grape.
It’s healed together with tape.
If you look behind it you'll find a cape
I value these things with my life
Like a man who values his wife
If you really want to know what it is......
Look inside of me
you will find the key.

4 comments:

  1. Keisha!

    Great poem. I really like the pacing and your use of repetition. Great build up to a moving end.

    Well done.

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  2. Amazing Keshia.
    I love it!!

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  3. keish Your poem hit very deep in my heart you shouldn't keep your secrets locked up let them out to a friend im very impress with your work keep it coming WELL DONE KEISH WELL DONE !

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  4. touching poem, if u are having probs talk to a friend

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